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I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
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LI: To explain in fewer words what the text is about.
This is the summarising dlo of what we wrote and summarise about a art artist His name was[ Rangi Haira Jaxson].We wrote down 20 important words from the text and choose the 6 most important words from the 20 words we wrote down then we used those 6 words to summarise up the text but in a sentences.
What we found interesting was that we learned about something that was captivating, incredible to find information about.
LI: To edit our writing using Draft
Today we worked in pairs and created an abstract noun poem to show what kindness means. When our poem was complete we used DRAFT to check our work and make it more powerful to read.
DRAFT means: Delete , Rearrange, Add , Fix, Talk
In our poem we used the Five senses which are taste, smell, hear, touch, feel and see .
We checked for correct punctuation including capital letters, full stops and commas.
An abstract noun is one that refers to an idea, quality or state that you cannot touch , see or hear.
My partner and I enjoyed this task because it help us to get more information about kindness and help learn how to be kind.
LI.To write a cinquain poem to describe a sports star.
We have been learning to write cinquain poems to help us strengthen our connections to description. A cinquain poem has 5 lines. Each line has a different purpose. Line 1 is a noun which is a name. Line 2 has 2 adjectives taht describe the noun. Line 3 has 3 verbs that end in ‘ing’ and describe the actions. Line 4 is a noun phrase which is a group of words (not a sentence) that go together to describe the noun. Line 5 is a synonym which is a word with a similar meaning to the noun.
I enjoyed this activity because it was fun createing this and it helped me learn Noun, Adjectives, verbs, Noun phrace, Synonym.
LI.To show my personal journey through books.
This week is book week at panmure bridge school, which means every class participates in a number of reading activities.One of our activites was to create a reading pathway that shows how my fvourte books have changed over time. At the moment I like reading books because it helps me learn new words from books I read which is good for me.